I won't be blogging for a little while.
A tragedy that was looming finally descended and I'm going to take a bit of personal time to deal with it.
I doubt I'll be able to go cold turkey so don't be surprised if I comment on your blog but I won't be writing so I won't be posting here.
Talk to y'all soon.
Wednesday, April 6, 2011
Wednesday, March 30, 2011
Day Five and Six
You don't have to say it - I know there was no cheating in the Bible. But God wasn't running behind because he had to share a computer so I'm catching up the best way I can!
Day Five and Six in Eden saw the creation of all the animals and finally man.
I made a man too. Not in my image of course but one that I wouldn't mind finding hanging out in my garden sans loincloth. An extremely alpha French chef. I took Gordon's Ramsay's talent and quite a bit of his arrogance, added Gilles Marini's accent and those dark brown eyes *le sigh* and then some of Eric Christian Olsen's hair (all dark blonde and unruly-ish) slapped it together and threw it on a Harley (yes I created them on the sixth day too)!
And while it's easy to 'make' a man physically, fleshing him out is quite another feat altogether. That old saying that a man is more than just the sum of his parts is very true. I'm getting to know him via my heroine and by writing through the story (aka writing lots of guff that will be pared back to the bone or hardly used at all) I'm working out how to introduce and resolve their individual and combined conflicts in 50k words.
I was a tad blocked today but I wrote through it and I think I'm back on track.
Oh and just a side note - Eve didn't make an appearance until after Day Seven when God had rested.
No, no pictures of a half-naked Gilles - something much sexier: a tall man with a french accent, dancing. Oh be still my beating heart *swoon*.
Day Five and Six in Eden saw the creation of all the animals and finally man.
I made a man too. Not in my image of course but one that I wouldn't mind finding hanging out in my garden sans loincloth. An extremely alpha French chef. I took Gordon's Ramsay's talent and quite a bit of his arrogance, added Gilles Marini's accent and those dark brown eyes *le sigh* and then some of Eric Christian Olsen's hair (all dark blonde and unruly-ish) slapped it together and threw it on a Harley (yes I created them on the sixth day too)!
And while it's easy to 'make' a man physically, fleshing him out is quite another feat altogether. That old saying that a man is more than just the sum of his parts is very true. I'm getting to know him via my heroine and by writing through the story (aka writing lots of guff that will be pared back to the bone or hardly used at all) I'm working out how to introduce and resolve their individual and combined conflicts in 50k words.
I was a tad blocked today but I wrote through it and I think I'm back on track.
Oh and just a side note - Eve didn't make an appearance until after Day Seven when God had rested.
No, no pictures of a half-naked Gilles - something much sexier: a tall man with a french accent, dancing. Oh be still my beating heart *swoon*.
Tuesday, March 29, 2011
Day Four
On the fourth day there was a great light. And Elissa did call it an "aha moment".
The Good Book tells us on the fourth day God created the sun and the moon and the stars to separate day from night and to mark seasons and the passage of time.
So more washing up and more thinking and I decided to totally re-write from about chapter four onwards. I mapped it out and ......it sucked. I had a very busy day yesterday: appointments, errands and meetings and the fact my deadline is only days away and I'm having all theses revelations about the characters and the plot line and the conflict issues being resolved (or not) means that I really am no where near ready to finish this baby.
That doesn't mean I'm giving up - just realising that what everyone has been saying about how hard editing can be is true. But the fact it's hard and that I'm finding all these issues with my work shows me something else - that I know more than I did a year ago. Back then I would have probably already sent this ms off, thinking it was a pretty hot dish with an outstanding chance of being published. Now? Well now I'm applying all my research and I hope that my end product will be much better for it.
The Good Book tells us on the fourth day God created the sun and the moon and the stars to separate day from night and to mark seasons and the passage of time.
So more washing up and more thinking and I decided to totally re-write from about chapter four onwards. I mapped it out and ......it sucked. I had a very busy day yesterday: appointments, errands and meetings and the fact my deadline is only days away and I'm having all theses revelations about the characters and the plot line and the conflict issues being resolved (or not) means that I really am no where near ready to finish this baby.
That doesn't mean I'm giving up - just realising that what everyone has been saying about how hard editing can be is true. But the fact it's hard and that I'm finding all these issues with my work shows me something else - that I know more than I did a year ago. Back then I would have probably already sent this ms off, thinking it was a pretty hot dish with an outstanding chance of being published. Now? Well now I'm applying all my research and I hope that my end product will be much better for it.
Monday, March 28, 2011
Day Three
Yes I know - technically this is Day Four but hey the Big Man upstairs took some time to get his achievements down on paper so I don't think a 24 hour time lag is such a big deal!
Ok.
On the third day Elissa did realise that she had completely messed up the middle and if she wanted her Hero to be a three dimensional character and actually have his conflict all sorted out by the end of the book then she was going to have to do some serious cutting. So Elissa did call for the good stuff to be separated from the bad stuff. And Elissa said let the bits happen at the end of the manuscript come forward and let the bits that come after be cut and removed from sight. And she called the good bits The Right Part and the other bits some words that can't be repeated. And Elissa saw that it was better. Not great. Maybe good. But definitely better. And the good bits did yield new ideas for a better ending.
According to the Good Book on the Third Day God separated the land from the seas and gave them names and then called forth the first plants into being. Me? I did lots of writing and then whilst doing the washing up last night (primetime for thinking folks) I realised that if I kept going the way I was, this book was going to be WAY too long. So then I started thinking about why it was so long and of course I realised that it was because I was writing 'filler'. The stuff that pads out that saggy middle. Rambling. Nice enough but not good enough. I needed to change things and the Hero was bothering me - the heroine is torturing him nicely, making him rethink his life and decisions but there's this deeper issue and it just wasn't going to get resolved if I kept going the way I was. So..........back to the creationist blackboard so to speak.
More detergent, a couple of stubbornly stained pots later and voila! I needed to bring events forward so he has the last third of the book to address that issue (with the heroine's 'assistance' aka interference of course).
Ok.
On the third day Elissa did realise that she had completely messed up the middle and if she wanted her Hero to be a three dimensional character and actually have his conflict all sorted out by the end of the book then she was going to have to do some serious cutting. So Elissa did call for the good stuff to be separated from the bad stuff. And Elissa said let the bits happen at the end of the manuscript come forward and let the bits that come after be cut and removed from sight. And she called the good bits The Right Part and the other bits some words that can't be repeated. And Elissa saw that it was better. Not great. Maybe good. But definitely better. And the good bits did yield new ideas for a better ending.
According to the Good Book on the Third Day God separated the land from the seas and gave them names and then called forth the first plants into being. Me? I did lots of writing and then whilst doing the washing up last night (primetime for thinking folks) I realised that if I kept going the way I was, this book was going to be WAY too long. So then I started thinking about why it was so long and of course I realised that it was because I was writing 'filler'. The stuff that pads out that saggy middle. Rambling. Nice enough but not good enough. I needed to change things and the Hero was bothering me - the heroine is torturing him nicely, making him rethink his life and decisions but there's this deeper issue and it just wasn't going to get resolved if I kept going the way I was. So..........back to the creationist blackboard so to speak.
More detergent, a couple of stubbornly stained pots later and voila! I needed to bring events forward so he has the last third of the book to address that issue (with the heroine's 'assistance' aka interference of course).
Saturday, March 26, 2011
Day Two
On the second day Elissa separated the sucky sort of ending she had written from the rest of the manuscript. And Elissa made another document into which she pasted the thousands of words she had written in error. And she called it Cut Material and it was truly sucky (with some not so sucky bits that she will probably use later). And even though it was exceedingly difficult to click on 'cut' she did it and then saw that it was good.
Biblically God separated the waters on Day Two and I cleft my manuscript in twain. It was not easy clefting but it was a much needed cleft and it is liberating to now have all that white space begging me to fill it up withscribble erudite composition!
Biblically God separated the waters on Day Two and I cleft my manuscript in twain. It was not easy clefting but it was a much needed cleft and it is liberating to now have all that white space begging me to fill it up with
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Friday, March 25, 2011
Day One
In the beginning Elissa created the manuscript. And the manuscript was without an ending and rubbish writing was entrenched in the deep. And Elissa said Let there be an ending. But in order for there to be an ending much middle-ing needed to be recreated and that was good.
Small deviation: Scientists are estimating that in between Genesis Chapter 1 Verse 1 and Verse 2 approximately 10 billion years elapsed (that's in between creating the universe and creating Earth) so I would just like to point out that in relation to that kind of time span, my teensy weensy lapse in my deadline is not so big.
So on the first day God created Night and Day and on my first I created a new middle. Well part of the new middle. A good bit of it, actually. Tweaked a few things here and there. Wrote a whole new part and cut several other parts out.
All in all, an inspiring start. It doesn't rank anywhere up there with Night and Day I grant you, but it's a good start.
Small deviation: Scientists are estimating that in between Genesis Chapter 1 Verse 1 and Verse 2 approximately 10 billion years elapsed (that's in between creating the universe and creating Earth) so I would just like to point out that in relation to that kind of time span, my teensy weensy lapse in my deadline is not so big.
So on the first day God created Night and Day and on my first I created a new middle. Well part of the new middle. A good bit of it, actually. Tweaked a few things here and there. Wrote a whole new part and cut several other parts out.
All in all, an inspiring start. It doesn't rank anywhere up there with Night and Day I grant you, but it's a good start.
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Thursday, March 24, 2011
Great Beginnings, Solid Middles and Super Endings
Okay so I'm batting 0 for 3.
I have a so-so beginning. I thought it was great. (Don't you always?) but after reading it countless times I'm convinced I can do better, and if I think that, of course an editor will too, won't they? Of course they will! So I need a better beginning.
The Girlfriend's Book Club is doing a very interesting set of posts at the moment on beginnings with a nice one about six must-have elements for a successful beginning. I think I have them all. But who knows about the voice one - I think I have a voice but is it like when you're tone deaf and think you're the next Celine Dion and you can't tell that you're not because you're...you guessed it....tone deaf?
Okay so I need to tweak the beginning three chapters.
A Solid Middle. No can do. I'm sagging here like one of those Biggest Losers after the weight loss when you look at them and think, yep with clothes on you look pretty good, much better than before. But you KNOW that hidden underneath the clothes is all that floppy skin, previously stretched taut by unwanted, unhealthy fat but at least it padded out the skin. Now the fat is gone the skin just hangs there and the only thing that's going to move it is a scalpel. After highlighting all the 'fat' that padded out the middle of my ms and losing it, I'm left with sad, floppy skin. I know what I have to do - attack it with a scalpel and then pilates the heck out of it so it's all toned and rippling muscle. You know the kind that you just want to run your fingers down - the kind when you're reading the middle of someone else's book and you don't even realise you're in the middle until you almost at the end and then your Writer's Brain kicks in and goes: "Hey! We missed the middle!" That kind.
Tweak the beginning
Tighten up the middle
A Super Ending. Hmmmmm. I'm sure I'll be able to nail this one. You know, when I actually do it. Write the ending that is. Yep, you heard right. I haven't written it yet. It's not that I don't know how it ends. I do. I just can't bear the thought of it 'ending'. I think that's the worst bit of a good book. Not knowing what comes next. All the How To Guides categorically state there's nothing worse than including mundane details of a character's life but you know in a good book I'd happily read 421 pages of washing up and ironing and cleaning and inane chatter with the neighbours if it meant the book didn't finish and my connection to those wonderful characters wasn't at an end.
Tweak the beginning
Tighten up the middle
Write a super ending.
And it all needs to be done in 7 days. Which instantly brings to mind (well mine anyway) Genesis - the biggest creation story EVAH! So over the next seven days I hope to bring you my version (without offending too many people I hope!). Fingers crossed I can do it. While you're waiting, watch Ricky Gervais talk about Genesis:
Excuse the language - but he is a funny bloke!
I have a so-so beginning. I thought it was great. (Don't you always?) but after reading it countless times I'm convinced I can do better, and if I think that, of course an editor will too, won't they? Of course they will! So I need a better beginning.
The Girlfriend's Book Club is doing a very interesting set of posts at the moment on beginnings with a nice one about six must-have elements for a successful beginning. I think I have them all. But who knows about the voice one - I think I have a voice but is it like when you're tone deaf and think you're the next Celine Dion and you can't tell that you're not because you're...you guessed it....tone deaf?
Okay so I need to tweak the beginning three chapters.
A Solid Middle. No can do. I'm sagging here like one of those Biggest Losers after the weight loss when you look at them and think, yep with clothes on you look pretty good, much better than before. But you KNOW that hidden underneath the clothes is all that floppy skin, previously stretched taut by unwanted, unhealthy fat but at least it padded out the skin. Now the fat is gone the skin just hangs there and the only thing that's going to move it is a scalpel. After highlighting all the 'fat' that padded out the middle of my ms and losing it, I'm left with sad, floppy skin. I know what I have to do - attack it with a scalpel and then pilates the heck out of it so it's all toned and rippling muscle. You know the kind that you just want to run your fingers down - the kind when you're reading the middle of someone else's book and you don't even realise you're in the middle until you almost at the end and then your Writer's Brain kicks in and goes: "Hey! We missed the middle!" That kind.
Tweak the beginning
Tighten up the middle
A Super Ending. Hmmmmm. I'm sure I'll be able to nail this one. You know, when I actually do it. Write the ending that is. Yep, you heard right. I haven't written it yet. It's not that I don't know how it ends. I do. I just can't bear the thought of it 'ending'. I think that's the worst bit of a good book. Not knowing what comes next. All the How To Guides categorically state there's nothing worse than including mundane details of a character's life but you know in a good book I'd happily read 421 pages of washing up and ironing and cleaning and inane chatter with the neighbours if it meant the book didn't finish and my connection to those wonderful characters wasn't at an end.
Tweak the beginning
Tighten up the middle
Write a super ending.
And it all needs to be done in 7 days. Which instantly brings to mind (well mine anyway) Genesis - the biggest creation story EVAH! So over the next seven days I hope to bring you my version (without offending too many people I hope!). Fingers crossed I can do it. While you're waiting, watch Ricky Gervais talk about Genesis:
Excuse the language - but he is a funny bloke!
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